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Wednesday, 21 January 2015

Crow (short story) chapters 1 & 2

One

The man in the nice suit approached the man in the not-so nice suit. Removing his hat while his astoundingly perfectly gelled hair stayed where it was, he poked up his tinted glasses and smiled. The other man looked shiftily around for an excuse to cross the street, scratching the back of his bald head before finally making eye contact.

“Mister Crow if I presume?” he asked, and the man with the darkened glasses nodded. He withdrew a notepad from his coat pocket.

“Oh blimey, does this mean I’m...” the bald man was cut off by Crow.

“I know this may seem a tad hard to come around, but you’re dead. Have been so for about 15 minutes. Sorry I’m a little late, I had some demons to fight, plus I stopped off at subway.”

“You fought demons!?”

“Don’t be ridiculous, demons don’t exist” Crow’s eyebrows scrunched, as it to mock pity the man’s ignorance.
The awkward silence was interrupted a little by the street flickering, not something streets tend to do often. The bald man looked around with widened eyes, as Crow clicked his pen.

“Look I know these are your last conscious seconds and all, but I really do have a job to do. Let’s start with your name?”
The man started to run, shooting out panicked gasps and white jagged lines closed in and cracked the flint wall around him. A faint rumbling could be heard in the distance and Crow sighed, tucking away his pen and notepad. Turning his back on the screaming man disappearing into the gaping white chasms, his round glasses flashed as he smoothly stepped through the ornate oak door behind him. As soon as he had shut and locked it behind him, the door was ripped apart by the white cracks that consumed the world, and tore the bald man messily in half.
The front of the car was no longer attached, as was the bald man’s head laying some feet away. Crow winced a little behind his glasses, stepping out the door and back into the blare of the sirens. The constable looked at him under the peak of his cap, and he coughed before he spoke.

“Get anything on him then?” he grunted. Crow weighed his pockets down with his hands sheepishly.

“Not as such no. He knew about me and was scared, so scared he chose to run into eternal sodomy and be ripped apart than talk to me.”

“Rightly so, I don’t blame him.”

“Can’t see why”
A trickle of brilliant blue liquid ran out under Crow’s sunglasses, and down his cheek.

“I’m hurt, Constable” he mocked, wiping it away. Walking toward the crashed car that had ended the bald man’s life, he peered in through the shattered windows. Whipping out his pad to take notes, he scribbled down the interior of the car and straightened up. The Constable shuffled over.

“Well, anything?”

“Other than this wasn't an accident? I mean it’s pretty clear this isn't an accident. Cars don’t decapitate people.”

“Or course it’s not an accident! We wouldn’t have called you if this was a normal hit & run job!”

“Fair play”

“So.....?” The Constable fumed. He was growing sick of being led around. Crow gestured to the car.

“Gang emblem crudely cut onto the left passenger door, tyres sourced from the dodgy end of town, traces of illegal substances seen on back seats, bald head and suit is very stereotypical and honestly who could miss that the blood splatters all over the car are at the wrong angle. The bald guy was shot against the bonnet, taken here; the car was crashed while the driver escaped. I’m suspecting drug debts or gang war.”

“That’s all very well thought out, you defiantly sure?” grumbled the Constable, already knowing the answer as Mr. Crow leaned his tall frame over him.


“Have I ever been wrong?” he smiled.




Two

Not a great deal was known about Mr. Crow, at least by the general public. Some said he had a long hooked nose and a feathered coat, likened to a real crow. Some said he was monstrously skinny and misshapen, helping the police by day but preying on innocents by night. Others claimed him to be just a normal bloke, a bit on the lanky side but generally dressed in nice sharp suits and constantly pushing up his dark glasses. The latter were the right people, and the description himself stalked along the broad sidewalk, looking a bit out-of-place. His greased back hair was once again hidden by his hat, and his coat collar was pulled up in the night air. He seemed deep in thought, until his head snapped up as the woman’s scream pierced the night air. It was cut off abruptly as it started, leaving Crow standing alone in the quiet street under the orange light, which flickered once or twice. Comically raising his nose to the air like a dog, the tall man sniffed and turned sharply to a small alleyway at his left. Unbuttoning his coat as he ran toward it, a set of six small sharp knives glinted in the orange, strapped three –a-side to his chest. The alley was empty, aside the blonde woman’s corpse. Crouching down next to her, Crow noticed the blood was dry. Shooting her unblinking face a puzzled look, he straightened up and turned to face the oak door that shimmered into reality behind him. Something stopped him opening the door though; this woman had been dead for days, so who had screamed just now? Another woman discovering the corpse then fleeing? No, the scream had been too abruptly cut off, almost like a recording...? The only way was through the door. Crow took hold of the door knob. The word “trap” hadn’t properly graced his mind till he was part way through, but by then it was too late. He was in the alley, but he saw no woman. When he passed through the door normally he was no more than 10 yards away than the person who died, and could interview them to discover the whereabouts of their deaths. Complicated, Crow glared at the alley, silently demanding the woman to show herself. The only way he didn’t look was up. The angel smashed into him, throwing him into the brick wall. He swung a fist at the skinny all-white creature, but it glanced harmlessly off the huge feathered wings. The creature was a starling white, with no markings aside two golden slits for eyes. Crow in his all black suit was stunned, thanking his sunglasses or he would’ve been blinded.

“Hello there, I’m looking for a woman.” He coughed, pushing up his glasses. The angel barked from no mouth, and Crow jumped a little.

“Ah well then, guess it’s the hard way. You didn’t even let me fini...”
The angel flung itself at him again, Crow barely dodging to the side before the wall he had sat against became a pile of rubble. Drawing a knife, he scanned around for the oak door. Street fighter style, the angel dropped down square in the middle of the alley, blocking Crow’s path to the door. Straightening up his lanky frame, he brushed some brick dust off his shoulder and in one swift movement flung the knife perfectly into the angel’s face. It screamed, golden blood splattering across the ground as Crow kicked out one of its legs and sent it sprawling to the ground with a shattering punch. Using the confusion, he leapt over the shrieking mass of white feathers and made a dash for the door. Ripping it open, he took one last look back as the angel pounced and carved his shoulder open with long golden fingernails. Crow cried out, slamming the door shut behind him with his good arm, and sagging down against it on the other side. Blood was pouring down his left shoulder, and he gritted his teeth while using the last of his strength to pull a phone out his pocket. Holding in his consciousness, he dialed.

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